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Toss a dime to hear these whiners rhyme

If anything else, we're not worth bets concerning finish lines

plain losers in sight on the fast lane of life

roadkills in a rat race that shames the three blind mice





For every advancing step we make with our best feet forward

we get dragged two steps backwards

just to get reminded that our other foot's already down the graves

reserved in secret places that'll preserve secrets when everyone else has gone to left us rotting



Wake up and smell the roses during mournings

find ourselves sourgraping in someone else's garden

and bleeding 'cause we got pricked back

by each thorned bud we tried to pick up



decapitated heads and tails jinxed by lady luck herself


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©2008-2010 ~LORDofDREAMS
:iconlordofdreams:

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Another one to drive my art watchers away


go easy on the hate mail

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:icontornelf:
I really love your hate writings especially when I feel sh!tty myself...

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To DO is to BE.
- Socrates
To BE is to DO.
- Plato
DOBEDOBEDO.
- Sinatra :boogie:

~bahayngfilipino :devPinay-Pinoy:
:iconxxsushinekoxx:
Damn, this is really good... and I love every verse.

You really have some talent. :aww:

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"We all make choices... but in the end, our choices make US." - Andrew Ryan, Bioshock

First comes knowledge.
Then comes the Power.
And you are responsible, especially for your own right to live, and live free.
-- Comment on Youtube.
:iconradgal05:
i like your works!!!.........
every line shows the feeLings..!

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-i know i'm not perfect and i dont live to be-
-i don't pretend coz i'm just being me-
:icondeboahan:
Pessimism FTW!! XD
May feelings naman eh. Di ba yun namana ng art?

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Hadouken!!
:iconlordofdreams:
thanks


that's very kind and inspiring of you

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Dreams don't come true. If you think they do, you need to wake up.
:iconradgal05:
much much weLcome...

waah...i just wish i also have that great mind like you..

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-i know i'm not perfect and i dont live to be-
-i don't pretend coz i'm just being me-
:iconlordofdreams:
hey, just refrain from thinking that you do not have one and everything will turn out...

I dunno

everything will start making sense maybe? ^^;

--
Dreams don't come true. If you think they do, you need to wake up.
:iconradgal05:
ahh ok!.. thanks for your inspring thoughts! :D

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-i know i'm not perfect and i dont live to be-
-i don't pretend coz i'm just being me-
:iconlordofdreams:
glad I could help

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Dreams don't come true. If you think they do, you need to wake up.

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