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Bed Time Sorry by ~LORDofDREAMS:iconLORDofDREAMS:



Too old for fairytales,
too immature for reality
Communication has its ways

Hickory Dickory
duck before the clock's right hand
hath struck to one

there lies a Strapped time bomb
set to blow without contingency plans
there's no room for a change of mind
to not see the intended consequences
by all means explode with hate, without justifications
and breathe burning remembrances more intoxicating than poison

just don't start creating lousy nursery crimes

not the same egghead that shouldn't
have sat in the wall
merely to fall
In faith that its own fairytale could fix
what all the king's horses and all the king's men couldn't

eight-year-olds know better
reality's poison apples are never
as ironic as stories that lead
to happily ever afters

Not the same puppet
who had a cricket for a conscience
A very long nose It's still wearing
but its wooden heart not caring

The cow jumped over the moon
A prince was thrown by a witch from the top of a tower
we weren't told if both survived
but we're sure that one did, and it's not sorry for the other

Apology expectancies are like beanstalks
they lead to castles in the air
and often when they aren't said
people grind your bones to make their bread


so go down the clock mouse
and start being a man
not a prince nor a frog or a former duckling swan

©2007-2010 ~LORDofDREAMS
:iconlordofdreams:

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:iconwithlovefromronni:
totally favourited!!!!

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Its me ronnie saying hey to all
:iconsilveriris101:
parang bitinsa ending pero...astiig! in love nako sau!!wahahah!!!joke!

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:iconbeserk-brent:
Yeah i like this...
You totally attacked the same very things that polluted our beliefs with such happy and perfectly ironic stories of love and life.
The foundation of our innocence and power to believe in such things..
I really like the clever word play its delicate and yet so obstructive.

Read some of mine would you...
I got this new one i wrote...
Its called Whats Religion?
I think you would like it
Hey nice stuff
Keep the good work up
Peace
:iconxxsushinekoxx:
Ha, this was great! :D

I really love how you took nursery rhymes and attributed them to a reality we can't face. It's really clever! :nod:

Keep it up! >3< d

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"We all make choices... but in the end, our choices make US." - Andrew Ryan, Bioshock

First comes knowledge.
Then comes the Power.
And you are responsible, especially for your own right to live, and live free.
-- Comment on Youtube.
:iconlordofdreams:
wow

thanks a lot

totally appreciate it <3

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Dreams don't come true. If you think they do, you need to wake up.
:iconlordofdreams:
itatanong ko sana ano po ung "bitinsa"

buti narealize ko "bitin sa" pala ^^;

nga e... parang maxado na mahaba pero gusto ko dagdagan ng something about "the mouse went up the clock" yung ending


maraming salamat sa suporta, nilalangaw poetry attempts ko e... <3

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Dreams don't come true. If you think they do, you need to wake up.
:iconlordofdreams:
Thanks man


I'll definitely take time to go over your works

especially after reading the profound comment you have just posted

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Dreams don't come true. If you think they do, you need to wake up.
:iconlordofdreams:
thank you

I guess I'm getting lucky lately by writing random thoughts and making them sound like they are really saying something ^^;

well the truth is, they're all random thoughts so I feel lucky to be getting this support from you guys...

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Dreams don't come true. If you think they do, you need to wake up.
:iconxxsushinekoxx:
O_O Wow, I wish my random thoughts were as epic as yours are...

:D Hey, we're just telling it how it is! *grins*

--
"We all make choices... but in the end, our choices make US." - Andrew Ryan, Bioshock

First comes knowledge.
Then comes the Power.
And you are responsible, especially for your own right to live, and live free.
-- Comment on Youtube.

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